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Post by Koolchat on Nov 2, 2008 16:34:38 GMT -5
alksdjflaksdjf asdflkjasdfl kajsd flkjasdflkjasdlfkasjd I NEED HELP!!!! I'm writing a story for Creative Writing, and the plot outline is due tomorrow. Unfortunatly, I have a good plot w/ beginning and ending, but NO FREAKING MIDDLE. HELP MEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Info On Characters: Willow is here: www.kodg2.proboards56.com/index.cgi?board=human2&action=display&thread=277Joeseph is here: www.kodg2.proboards56.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=pastchars&thread=264&page=1Info on the Shadowed and Rouges and Falon here: www.gaiaonline.com/forum/barton-town/trust-safe-from-none-no-one-accepting-profiles/t.38428529/1. Willow is hunting 2. Goes home to the only remaining structure: public bathroom 3. has a ‘tantrum’ 4. Opens up her hand on some glass calms down 5. Goes exploring 6. Explores library 7. Library is burnt down with only a few books left 8. Sees Joeseph and hides 9. Finds her: attempts to talk to her 10. She can’t comprehend: only recognizes a few words 11. Speaks for the first time in years (detail on scratchy voice) PLOT HOLE THE SIZE OF THE MILKY WAY: MEETS ROUGE LEADER AND STUFFS, DETAILS ON FALON, WHERE HE GOES, WHO HE IS, ETC. Ending: Willow is killed by rouge leader, due to her being the daughter of the immortal ‘riki’ ( who was never supposed to be able to have children ) and having the ‘power of pure light (GOD)’ in her blood. This alone can defeat the shadowed queen.
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Post by Koolchat on Nov 2, 2008 16:44:52 GMT -5
Unnngghhh... Maybe I just need a new plot! Screw the shadowed! It'll still be a dead zone, but maybe... It'll be, like, a part of the world that has been cut off!!!! Like, the Indonesian Islands or something: something the world just conveniently 'forgot' about, due to the war!!!!!!!!! OMG! I HEAR COGS CLINKING! CHINK! CHINK~ KATHUNK~ SO, no sacrifice, but possibly a better plot... Any help?
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Post by Vivinette Rendair on Nov 2, 2008 18:24:17 GMT -5
Hmmmm!
Let's see....
Well, for the middle, you could have Willow and Joeseph form a sort of 'alliance' and work together for... whatever. And then get split up somewhere along the way, and Willow meets up with the Rouge Leader in her quest to find Joeseph and.... I lost it. D:
DID I HELP?!
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Post by Momo on Nov 2, 2008 18:28:54 GMT -5
LOL! Me n' my friend Darky are working on it together, since I provided her with much fluff and an alternate ending to her story xD NOw, it's this: See, I was thinking, the war is over, so they send a doctor team out to find if anyone has survived (after, of course, like, 10 years, harhar.) Only, this guy gets lost and finds Willow.... But she's all feral and stuffs, but what be the ending? What be the purpose? He needs to get back to his team, but there should be something fishy in her town. Like, a disease or something, or some animal.... Or the shadows, which are brewing?? AH! The start of the shadow war? Like, they release the queen or something? CLUNK! CLUNK! Hrm. Villagers? There are none. Why do you think Willow is insane? xD She's been by herself these years. I was thinking more of a Pandora's Box thing. Like, Willow could have a pendant that was passed down from Riki (and heaven knows all the evil crap she has) and the doctor experiments on it. I need a bit more fluff, though, to go in the middle.... Like, the ending will be, "WHAT HAVE WE DONE??" as the Queen proceeds to do something evil, like kill someone? Dunno, lulz. GUESS WHO THE DOCTOR IS. www.kodg2.proboards56.com/index.c....play&thread=241*is a horrible character-stealer-and-adapter* I figured you'd need someone kind and relatively sane to put up with Willow ((Both are quotes, hurhur))
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