Post by Vivinette Rendair on Oct 20, 2008 17:54:50 GMT -5
Feel free to join in with mine, or yours!
Die For You
Shattered hearts lie abound here, (When Marik was denied his dream of leaving the tomb.)
Where storms brew abound. (His brewing anger)
Darkness is their fear, (Not wanting to slip away.)
Lies die without a sound. (Odion's optimistic lies?)
It’s all a lie, (Denial.)
A cruel twisted story. (Again, denial.)
With a soundless cry, (Being unable to cry out for help.)
Lying in wounded glory. (When he kills his father?)
Pain rages on, (Self-explanatory)
Breaking souls. (Hm... When he was losing it?)
The will is gone, (The will to fight it.)
Leaving bitter holes. (Hurm. Anger at Yami?)
The hate rises, (Yami Marik, of course.)
It’s too cruel. (About his life.)
It rains in crisis, (Hm. Maybe how 'when it rains, it pours'?)
Played a fool. (Played a fool by fate.)
The break is cold, (When he kills Joey)
The wails bitter. (Serenity, Yugi, etc.'s cries.)
The trail is old, (Not being able to bring him back)
Called a quitter. (Yami, when he wanted to stop fighting.)
Romance is a fate, (Joey and Sabrina)
Bound in chains. (Mai's duel, where she was trapped by the chains.)
Fueling is hate, (Joey hated Marik for trapping Mai.)
Where death reigns. (Mai's liability to die.)
They died against you, (Joey and Mai)
You never saw. (Yami Marik's uncaring attitude.)
They were true, (True friends)
Your gaping maw. (Hrm. Maybe his weakness.)
Demons dance, (Malik and Marik, in their deadly card game.)
Crooked songs. (Bakura's shadow realm idea?)
Stricken by lance, (When Joey was struck by lightening sent by Ra.)
Committed wrongs. (When Odion summoned the false Ra.)
Burn with blood, (Yami Marik's desire to win.)
However known. (How obvious it was.)
Battled in mud, (The final battle?)
Merely but a pawn. (Tea, of course, as she was used by Malik to communicate.)
Broken hearts lay abound him, (After Malik returned normal, when everyone had to pick up themselves again.)
His storm set abrew. (His shame at himself)
Blind yet to them, (Both his shame and Yugi-tachi's dislike)
I would die for you. (Rebound's feelings, but to Yami Marik or Marik?)
No, I don't know what have my poems mean. xDDD Honestly, when I wrote this, I was NOT thinking of Marik/Y. Marik. At ALL. It just... turned out like that.
..It could work for Bakura too, though... MORE DISSECTION!
Die For You
Shattered hearts lie abound here, (When Marik was denied his dream of leaving the tomb.)
Where storms brew abound. (His brewing anger)
Darkness is their fear, (Not wanting to slip away.)
Lies die without a sound. (Odion's optimistic lies?)
It’s all a lie, (Denial.)
A cruel twisted story. (Again, denial.)
With a soundless cry, (Being unable to cry out for help.)
Lying in wounded glory. (When he kills his father?)
Pain rages on, (Self-explanatory)
Breaking souls. (Hm... When he was losing it?)
The will is gone, (The will to fight it.)
Leaving bitter holes. (Hurm. Anger at Yami?)
The hate rises, (Yami Marik, of course.)
It’s too cruel. (About his life.)
It rains in crisis, (Hm. Maybe how 'when it rains, it pours'?)
Played a fool. (Played a fool by fate.)
The break is cold, (When he kills Joey)
The wails bitter. (Serenity, Yugi, etc.'s cries.)
The trail is old, (Not being able to bring him back)
Called a quitter. (Yami, when he wanted to stop fighting.)
Romance is a fate, (Joey and Sabrina)
Bound in chains. (Mai's duel, where she was trapped by the chains.)
Fueling is hate, (Joey hated Marik for trapping Mai.)
Where death reigns. (Mai's liability to die.)
They died against you, (Joey and Mai)
You never saw. (Yami Marik's uncaring attitude.)
They were true, (True friends)
Your gaping maw. (Hrm. Maybe his weakness.)
Demons dance, (Malik and Marik, in their deadly card game.)
Crooked songs. (Bakura's shadow realm idea?)
Stricken by lance, (When Joey was struck by lightening sent by Ra.)
Committed wrongs. (When Odion summoned the false Ra.)
Burn with blood, (Yami Marik's desire to win.)
However known. (How obvious it was.)
Battled in mud, (The final battle?)
Merely but a pawn. (Tea, of course, as she was used by Malik to communicate.)
Broken hearts lay abound him, (After Malik returned normal, when everyone had to pick up themselves again.)
His storm set abrew. (His shame at himself)
Blind yet to them, (Both his shame and Yugi-tachi's dislike)
I would die for you. (Rebound's feelings, but to Yami Marik or Marik?)
No, I don't know what have my poems mean. xDDD Honestly, when I wrote this, I was NOT thinking of Marik/Y. Marik. At ALL. It just... turned out like that.
..It could work for Bakura too, though... MORE DISSECTION!